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I Had To Suffer A Little- by *FaustScribe:iconFaustScribe:



I had to suffer a little- to see His face
He appeared one morning when the sun rose
and streamed between the blinds

I was asleep when I heard His step on the porch
what I heard?-  I'm sure I wanted to hear
although I could not mistake a sound

It was in my head- the last thing.
I remember the sunlight
like a rivulet streaming

I could not feel it-
my eyes had been blinded
and my doubt was gone
©2009-2010 *FaustScribe
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Author's Comments

I wrote this last night.

It is open to interpretation.

It is about my faith.

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:iconleurindal:
Now that I've read that it's about faith, I like it even more :)

well done again! (and sorry!) :heart:

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"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.

J. Keats
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No don't be sorry! Please don't be.

Poems can be about anything to anyone. Thats the joy of art.

No worries,

LaMer x

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Buttons are cute.
:iconleurindal:
:tea: :rose:

--
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.

J. Keats
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Wow tea and a rose! I'm a happy monkey!

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Buttons are cute.
:iconleurindal:
Wow a happy monkey! I'm even happier then! :)

:tea: --> for more future happy monkeys. Cheers!

:rose: --> for more beautiful poetry yet to come!

--
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.

J. Keats
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Oh that means so much to me Pip! I'm proud of this one. Its about faith.

:)

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Buttons are cute.
:iconalapip:
there are many thoughts
attracted by this, LaMer.

of what i've read of yours
these few months, this is
to me, your absulute best.

:heart:

pip

--
when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09

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